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Wednesday, January 09, 2008

DBSK Fan Fiction - Part 1

Can't believe I'm writing a fan-fiction based on Dong Bang Shin Ki!!
I'm posting it here... well, it's only one quarter of the story... Hope non of Dong Bang Shin Ki Casseiopeia will come and kill me! >___<" joesunghamnida! Pls dont kill me... it just for the sake of fun...

The heroin: Rynn (created by me. No such person existed)

The hero: Shim Chang Min @ Max Choikang Changmin DBSK and Kim Jae Joong @ Hero Youngwoong Jae Joong DBSK.

The friends: The rest of DBSK members

Location: City of Seoul, South Korea


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Chapter 1. What is the temperature of love now?


It was drizzling. Rynn felt a slight cold on her chest. Maybe its because she don’t really have much fat to burn. Her slim fingers went numb. She trembled as she tried to open up her pink umbrella. In this big city of Seoul, anything can possibly happen.

As she walking down the street, she passed by a huge billboard of Dong Bang Shin Ki, again. Those boys are pretty popular these days… she mumbles and chuckles as she keep on walking slowly, trying to find her way back home. She still cant believe that there is such boyband, so successful and very likeable by everyone. How she wish to meet them in person, catch one of their live performances or something like that. Or a concert, maybe…. She really would love to see them with her own eyes. Are they really, REALLY as cool as they look?

But right now, she’s kinda lost in the city and she need aid… Rynn sort of have forgotten her way back home. Eventhough she has been here since two weeks ago, she still not familiar with the road yet and still very easy to get lost.
“What’s wrong with me? I didn’t go THAT far, didn’t I? Urgh.., I’m such an idiot..” she grumbles and mumbles to herself again as she flip through her pocket Korean dictionary. She needs to ask direction from the local. She needs to go home.

Suddenly she was distracted by some giggles not so far from her sight. It was a bunch of Korean ladies swarming around a guy, or she should addressed the guy as the most tallest, hottest, cutest Korean man she’d ever seen in her life so far! He is tall, thin but tough –looking, wide chest, broad-shouldered, dark-haired shaggy hair, handsome looking face with a curvy, sexy lips. He has a killer smile too. He is like an angel. Rynn felt her heart stop beating for a second. It was one massive impact indeed.



Not so far behind them, she saw a dorky-looking guy creeping slowly with a knife towards the handsome guy. She wanted to scream, but those voice seems to choke.
“Darn! What should I do?” she panicked. “I cant stand here and watch him dead??” she mumbled again. She have to do something before its too late…

So Rynn decided to get herself near the handsome guy and start shouting.
“Hey you! Run!” she screamed. The tall guy looked at her in surprised. The girls around him seems angry, staring at her as they felt like strangling her right away. Or, they just don’t understand English…
“Run now, you idiot!!” She dropped her umbrella and run towards the handsome guy as fast as she could. The guy still look puzzled and in shock.

The dorky boy with knife didn’t wait either. He walked even faster towards the handsome guy, wanting to slash him right away and done with it. Rynn can see it in his face. The dork one seems furious, full of anger and jealousy that she couldn’t imagine. She don’t really know what she’s doing, but she knows her heart saying that she’s doing the right thing.

Rynn got there slightly earlier that the dork. She stand right in front of the handsome guy, stared at him just before she could feel a sharp, tingling sensation, burning pain from her left shoulder to her back. The bunch of girls stood there, they screamed and shrieked as they saw the incident. Someone is trying to kill HIM. The dorky guy panicked for slashing the wrong person, quickly ran away after dropping his knife which is full of blood.
Meomchuseyo!!!*” (meaning 'stop' in Hangguk)

The handsome guy shouted in panic, asking the guy to stop running. He moved Rynn aside and try to run after the bad guy before he could disappear in the darkness. He lost him in a second. Looking so frustrated and angry, he get back to Rynn. His eyes widen as he saw a lot of blood running down from Rynn’s knitted shirt.

Rynn smiled in relief seeing the handsome guy is okay and unharmed. At least, I’ve done what I supposed to, and you’re safe..
Gwenchanayo?” asked the ‘prince’, politely. But he could not control his voice, it sounds shaky and Rynn knew he is worried.
Eodi apayo?” He held Rynn closely and keep staring at her eyes, as he was wondering why on earth did the girl sacrificed for him at the first place. Its very brave of her, not even one of the girls he hanged out with just now would do the same thing.
Mianhe, hanggumal mothamnida. I speaks English. I’m not Korean..” Rynn replied back, smiling but he knew she is in pain.
“But you just speaks in Korean, my dear..” he smiles a bit.
“You can speak English? Thank God!” Rynn giggled. The handsome guy grinned and smirked at the same time. He can’t believe Rynn has a mindset that Koreans are zero in English. Can’t believe you said that to my face…
“I think you need to see a doctor..” he said, in a very polite tone.
“Yeah, I think I should too.. I’m feeling weak..” She nearly fell but the guy manage to grab her skinny body.

The guy face turned sour as he held her up. The cut is deeper that he thought. She bleed quite a lot, too. But she act tough in front of me.. Wae? Why? Why she hid her pain from my sight? He felt pain in his heart in a sudden. Does she know who I am? But he doubted it. This girl didn’t say his name at all!
“So, there is some girls in Korea who still don’t know who I am..” Changmin mumbled to himself. “Well, she’s not even a Korean.. So it’s not weird if she didn’t know me..” he whispered and murmured all by himself in the taxi.

Rynn already can’t feel her arm. She felt so weak, and she didn’t know why. She finally surrender, letting her body to rest as she closed her eyes…
Ajusshi!” Changmin poked her on her body and cheek a few times. He shaked her whole body but it seems lifeless. She passed out.
Ppalli yo!” Changmin urged the taxi drive to speed up, as he held Rynn’s motionless body tightly next to his.


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Rynn opened her eyes slowly. I fell asleep, wasn’t I? She asked herself. As she turn to her head to aside, she saw a handsome young man sitting closely next to her, looking at her so dearly. The handsome, fine young man that she saved.
“How are you feeling?” he quickly asked.
“Where.. where am I.. Who, who are you…?” Rynn sounds dumb. Anyway, the handsome guy look obviously familiar. Rynn finally can see the guy’s face clearly under the white light.
Changmin smiled gleefully. This girl is so amuzing.
“Are you a lost puppy?” he asked, sarcastically.
“What.. what did you just say?”
“Are you a ‘lost puppy’? Why did a girl like you wander around in the city alone, not knowing the place, not knowing the language, prefer to get stabbed and end up admitted to the emergency ward?”

Rynn quickly looked around and found out her body is nicely bandage. She quickly tried to get up, that is when Changmin’s face changed.
Aigoo..~ Please be careful! Don’t move too much~ Or else your wound will bleed again..” he snapped. He help her got up on the bed. Rynn said sorry quite a few times.
“You don’t have to say sorry. I’m the should be saying that. You’re here because of my fault.” He said softly. “By the way, ireumi mwo eyo? I’m Changmin!”
“I’m Rynn.” She replied.
“Rynn, from….”
Malaysia saram eyo.”
Ahhh.…~” he say it in a long ‘ah’. He seems not surprised at all. “I’ve been there before.. Kuala Lumpur, very hot..” he smiled cheekily.
“I see, you’ve been in my country before. Amazing. Of course, cos you’re.. Oh my God, don’t tell me you’re Changmin? Err, are you THAT Changmin? THAT Choikang Changmin???” Rynn screamed a bit. Changmin seems to nod his head several times.

Rynn realized it all now. All the CM, all the MV, the huge billboard by the street, even on the Lotte sticks, it’s HIM! It’s really him!!! Max, Choikang Changmin!!! She blushes suddenly. She felt like God is playing with her now.
“Changmin-sshi, can I, can I go home?” she asked softly. She don’t feel like staying overnight there.
“Hm?” he nodded. “Why not… I’ll send you..”
“ But, I.. I.. I really don’t know where I lived…”
“What??” Changmin burst into laughter. She’s not trying to find way to get into my house, is she?
“I have the address, but I don’t know where it is… Seriously!” she cries, feeling embarrassed when Changmin still laughing at her. Poor Rynn!
“Can you help? Jeosonghamnida!” she apologized.
So she isn’t joking.. Really a lost puppy..
“Ah, aniyo.. gwenchana…~” Changmin smiled at her, believed that she is sincere. Again, Rynn felt her heart skipped a beat. The massive impact, again.

<Laughing at Rynn..>

She pass him her phone, containing a memo of her own address. He looked at it, humming a bit, and pass back the phone to her hand.
“Okay! No problem… Ka ja?” He quickly helped her get off from the bed.
Changmin really CAN’T believe it. This girl doesn’t even know where her house is!! Total cuteness to him, absolute ‘lost puppy’! He never experienced anything like this before, so this moment is quite special to him. Shim Changmin, a man with everything with a girl who knows nothing.

They both kept quiet in the taxi, until they totally reached a place which Rynn can recognized.
“Hey, you found my house!” she cries in excitement.
“Of course, you little puppy..” replied Changmin, with a grin. “I know this place so well..”
“Oh really. I thought you only rely on the taxi driver.”
Changmin starts laughing and looked at her in amazed. He pulled her closely to him.
“Now, I’ll send you exactly to your doorstep.. okay?” he insisted and smiled.

Rynn left with no other choice but to agree to him. She didn’t know how to react. Rynn decided to stay calm and just enjoy the moment while it still last.
“I believed, we’re here. Your home.” he said, as he looked at the apartment’s nicely carved wooden door.
“Yes, we are. Gomawoyo..” Rynn bow as paying her gratefulness to him. He quickly held her up as disagree to her action.
“No! No, no.. Don’t thank me like this. I’m so embarrassed! I’m the one who should be saying thank you to you. I didn’t know the anti-fans would go this far. It’s all my fault you got hurt. Please, don’t bow to me..” He said in a sad tone.
“I’m glad that you didn’t got hurt. Thank you anyway, for sending me back home.” Rynn smiled and quickly unlocked the door in front of her.

Changmin didn’t understand why his heart pounded very quickly, as him being nervous. He didn’t know why he is hoping for the girl to turn around and say something to him. Or stop him. He don’t understand why he would wish such thing to happen, and why her. But he seems to secretly wishing for it. He secretly wished for Rynn to give him one romantic moment since this is his FIRST time to hang like a couple with a girl.

This girl really gave an impact to his brain. He knew he was wishing for something impossible, because they are both strangers. They don’t know each other. They say ‘hi’, and they end up saying ‘bye’. That’s what stranger do. They don’t see each other after that anymore….
“Changmin-sshi..”
Changmin studdered in astonishment.
“I’m asking you as a friend. Would you like to come in and at least, have a cup of coffee before you leave?”
Rynn never felt so nervous before. She knew she might have to face the biggest rejection ever in her life but at least, she tried. Who is she anyway? Exactly. Rynn, just an average girl and Changmin, a superstar. He is a man of every girl’s dream. They can never be together. She should probably stop dreaming...

Changmin turned around and his lips start to curve a smile at her. He nods a little.
“Sure. Why not.” He replied back, seems so happy to get the invitation.
So Rynn open the door as he enterered slowly into the hall. The light is dim and the hall is tidy. As Rynn shut the door closed, she turned on one light on the other side of the hall. She slowly walked into the kitchen and start doing her thing.
Changmin still looking around, amazed to be in a girl’s place.
“Hot keopi?” she asked him from far.
Eung, maja.” He replied back and continue enjoying his view. She has a nice white lace curtain, a cute picture of her in high school uniform, plushy pillow everywhere in different funky colours, and a few fashion magazines lying around the sofa.
“You like my place? I just found it two weeks ago. Not bad, right..?” Rynn told him and hand over a mug fill with hot white coffee. Changmin held it nicely and have his first sip.
“Wahhh..~” he cries in surprised. “It tasted so..”
“Unique and nice?” Rynn asked him back. He quickly nodded and have another sip. It was the best coffee he ever tasted. It’s very different, unexplainable.
“I was a coffee master back then in my place. I even brought my mini espresso machine here so I can served good coffee. It’s one of my passion.” Rynn smiled and sit down on her favourite spot. She offered him a seat.

Changmin played around with the mug before he could look up at her and begin to chat. He wanted to know a lot, but he don’t know how to start. Maybe I should ask a simple question first….
“Rynn-sshi, if you don’t mind. Why you’re here? I mean, in Korea? Is there any particular reason?” He asked, curiously.
“Yes, there is.. But it seems quite impossible now. I didn’t expect Korea to be this big. Being in Seoul itself, haha, I got lost so many times!” Rynn giggles softly and still thinking of what a stupid arse she was this evening.
“So you’re sure looking for someone, I see…” just as he thought!
“Wow, you’re smart!. Changmin will always be Changmin. A smart university student with a blessed voice..”
“Oh no, stop praising me. I’ll blushed!” He laughed.
“Come on! Can you sing a little for me..?” Rynn simply begged. She knew he will sing if she ask for it.
“Sing? Now? Ok..” and Changmin starts singing the chorus of ‘You’re My Miracle’ gently. His voice really soothing, Rynn almost drown in her own imagination.
“Wow..~ that is veryyyyy good.” She clapped her hands, applausing.
“Ah, aniyo.. don’t praise me. I’m very shy..” Changmin giggled a little. Rynn giggles a little, because Changmin look so cute when he is embarrassed.

She put down her mug on the coffee table and start to dozed off. Her body felt so weak than ever. Rynn was not sure if it’s the medication or something else. She felt sleepy and very tired. A buzz of someone handphone broke down the silence.
“Oh, mianhe. It’s my phone.” Changmin snapped and quickly searched his pocket for it. He took a peep at the screen and mumbled.. “Argh! It’s hyung!”
He quickly answered the call.
Yeoboseyo?” When Changmin picked the phone he knew he’ll get toasted!
“Changminnie, you naughty boy! Where WERE you?? You makes us all so worried!! You were with us in the club, and you told Yunho that you’re going to the bathroom. The next minute, you disappeared with some girls.. Are you going crazy??” Jae Joong cannot help it but continuously blabbering at him as soon as he picked up.
“It’s a long story, hyung.. Joesunghamnida.. Please don’t get mad at me..” Changmin speaks in soft tone and try to calm him down.
“What’s so long about it? Cos Hyung have plenty of time to listen to all of your excuses!” Jae Joong shrieked.
Hyung, I nearly got slashed by an anti-fan. But that bad guy managed to get away..”
“You what? Mwo rago? Yah, yah.. Changminnie~ where did he slashed you? Neol gwenchana? Are you ok? Did you get hurt?” Jae Joong’s eyes wide open. He was in a state of shock in his life. His heart pounded so quickly, he feel like choking for a moment.

Changmin heard Jae joong’s voice suddenly changed. He trembled and trembled. It's really Jae Joong, he cares about the members a lot.
“Don’t worry, hyung. I’m not hurt at all, not a single scratch. But there’ s girl, she was the one who saved me..”
“A girl?"
“She..” Changmin felt like breaking down to tears. His throat feels so dry. He was still touched by her courage.
“Changminnie.. This isn’t like you at all. Did anything happen to the girl..” Jae Joong's tone goes even lower, he can sense Changmin’s sadness too. It’s obvious to him that Changmin is unhappy.
Hyung, she.. she took the place for me. I’m the one who should get slashed but instead, she took it for me! The cut was quite serious, she got about 18 stitches. When the doctor told me about it, I feel so bad! She’s just a girl, she’ll have ugly scar, all my fault. My fault. But I didn’t have heart to tell her.”
“I didn’t tell her. I just can’t! And I didn’t tell her that she had to stay in hospital for another day or two…” Changmin explained in a very sad, tensed voice. Jae Joong felt it too. He must felt so bad about it… Jae Joong bit his lips and he listen quietly as Changmin keeps on talking (in Korean of course, he didn’t want Rynn to understand). “When she said she want to go home, I agree right away and sent her back. I didn’t have heart to say no. So, now I’m in her house. It’s okay, I am safe here. No one saw me.”

Jae Joong held his breath up and blew it slowly. He felt much better. More relief. Changmin did not get hurt at all, but some mysterious girl appeared to be some superwoman..? Jae Joong chucked a bit, before he heard Changmin’s voice get annoyed by his ignorance.
Hyung? Hyung? Hyung!! You monster! Are you still there, are you listening? Or you’re laughing at me??”
“Hey, who are you calling ‘monster’? Where are you, want me to come over?” asked Jae Joong, quickly.
Eung, sure. But please don’t tell the others. Just come alone, please. I don’t want everyone to get worry. I’ll explain to Yunho, Yoochun and Junsu myself.. also to the manager…” He said confidently. Jae Joong cant agree more to Changmin’s wise decision.
“Ahhh..~ Arasseo, arraseo… I’ll make up some story and come to see you now..”
KLIK! He quickly hung up the phone.

Changmin sighed. So, he told Jae Joong-hyung about it. He almost forgot about Rynn. She must be sick bored listening to their superspeed Korean conversation. He moved from his spot and went closer to Rynn. She seems to be asleep. So quiet, so angelic.
"Mwo ya..? I can't be falling in love with this, this puppy!" he snapped at himself. But he can't deny that he had a slight feeling for her, and he felt so uneasy for that. He sat down on the floor, next to her, looking at her sleeping face. This is what guy usually do when their girl is sleeping.. Most novel says so..

As he drew himself closer, he felt a slight heat coming from Rynn's body.
"Oh my God.. She having fever already..." Changmin panicked. He touches her forehead and a sharp warmth hit his hand immediately.
"Otteoke.. Hyung!" His mind automatically thinks of Jae Joong. He will come handy in this kind of situation since he is very good at taking care sick people. He took care of Yoochunnie before.

"Hyung, it's me!" he cries as Jae Joong pick up the phone.
"Ooh.." He had to pick up this kid's call even while he is driving! Jae Joong mumbled to himself. "Yes, I know it's you! Whats the matter now..."
"The girl, she already fell sick.." Changmin slowly pinching his own head. And I'm such an idiot who don't know how to handle this...
"Hum? Ah, arasseo. I'll get some medication and come over quickly. You don't worry, I'm nearby." Jae Joong quickly pull over and stop exactly in front of the 24-hours mart.

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will be continued......

read Part 2 here...

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3 Comments:

At 7:47 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hello.. ur story is incredibly interesant... so please !!! write the chapter 3.. I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
or at least tell me u're writting it now.. ^^
please :)

thx again it's really great!

 
At 12:35 AM, Blogger 5five6six said...

thanks for your unconditional support!! XD XD i wrote it already, just some adjustment and need to be typed into the blog...

 
At 7:33 PM, Blogger amstylo said...

hi!
wow, what a nice storyline!
hrmm hrmm..i started to feel that i'm rynn already..(n i knew that rynn must be u, isn't it? hehe)
how i'd wish to go to korea n face-to-face with my ChangMin. huhu
keep it up!
i like to join your blogspot. can i? how to join it? i'm his fan plus DBSK too.
nice knowing you!! (^,^)

 

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