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Thursday, January 31, 2008

DBSK Fan Fiction - Part 3

Title: When You Said You Loved Me
Characters: Shim Chang Min / Kim Jae Joong (JaeMin SoulFighter)
Length: until now, it just begin...
Rating/Genre:
Summary: it's a love story begin to bloom between Changmin and a mysterious girl he met on the street, but it became more complicated as Jae Joong came across their way.

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Changmin helped Jae Joong to clean up the dining hall a little before Jae Joong suddenly asked him to bring the samgyetang to Rynn’s room and feed her.
“It’s really good to combat with body heatness due to fever. Hyung will clear all this.” He said in a soft spoken tone.
Ne, arasseo.” Changmin quickly get done with his sweeping and follow exactly what Jae Joong asked him to.



Jae Joong looked at him walking away until he disappeared behind the kitchen wall. His heart still thumping like crazy when he recall the ‘kissing’ moment he had with the ‘pretty boy’ Changmin. And it’s not like it was the first time. Jae Joong was the one who stole Changmin’s first kiss and he was sure that all Cassiopeia already knew about that! He did that on one morning, when Changmin was sleeping and refuse to wake up. Poor Changmin! The poor, handsome crybaby woke up with tears on his face because he was saving the ultimate kiss for a girl that he really, really like. Bad Jae Joong for stealing it away from him!



But reality is, no matter how much he likes him, it is totally against the odds.
Andwae..! Na michigaesseo??” He whispered to himself if he was crazy enough to like his own dongsaeng that much.
Maldo andwae yo.. I have to get rid of this feeling. This is not right. It can be right for me, but its not for him..” He continued whispering to himself again, all alone in the kitchen.



Changmin put down the tray with a spoon, a bowl and the samgyetang pot next to Rynn’s bedpost. He looked at the girl’s sleeping face over and over again. He never really kiss a girl before. He was saving it for a girl he really, really like. He was saving that moment for 21 years already. But of course, it was stolen from Jae Joong-hyung, that evil monster. It happen when he was asleep. But hyung wasn’t really a girl. He may look girlish, sounds girlish, graceful or even give sweet kiss like a girl, but he is not a real girl.
“Do I have feeling for her? If I don’t, why is my heart felt differently?” Changmin asked himself. He looked at her closely, and he bend down a little. He was so near to Rynn’s face, adoring her long eyelashes and peach-coloured lips. He looked at her as if he want to kiss her. He want to. Changmin trembled a bit, that is when he accidently woke her up.



Rynn was shocked to see a handsome guy was looking down at her as if he want to chomp her up just like that. The eyes were so beautiful, as beautiful as Han River. Anyway, what was he thinking?
Yeah. What was I thinking? Changmin felt like he wanted to choke himself to death, totally embarrassed. He was caught in the act! So he just smiled and pretend like nothing happen.
“Changmin-sshi..” Rynn's sweet voice finally came out.
“How are you feeling now?” He asked, still feeling embarrassed like hell.
“Did I fainted? I’m so sorry.. I caused you trouble…” Rynn cries softly.
“Don’t worry about that, okay? It’s not your fault that you’re sick. We are friends now, remember? Here, please have some soup..” Changmin smiled and pass her a bowl of samgyetang.
“You can cook? Changmin-sshi.. you’re so full of suprises..” she praised.
“Ah, aniyo. It’s not me. It’s my hyung.” He replied.
Hyung?” She looks puzzled.
“Ahhh..” Changmin grinned, knew he haven’t introduce his hyung to her yet. He called out Jae Joong’s name loudly.
Hyung-ah! Hyung-ah! Ppalli!!
De! Wae geurae yo?” Jae Joong rushed a little, because he was so sure something bad has happened. This Changmin will do that if he gets into trouble, he will definitely call for his hyungs.



As Jae Joong enter the room, it was a total silence. Rynn really cannot believe her eyes. The two angels of Dong Bang Shin Ki were in her apartment all these while. In her tiny, little apartment. One of them took care of her, while the other cooks for her. Oh, my God..
God’s power is really amazing.
“Changmin, that is Young Woong Jae Joong.. rite?” her voice shaked a little as the other pretty but handsome guy stared at her with his killer look.
“Jae Joong-hyung, this is Rynn. Rynn, Jae Joong-hyung.” Changmin said, pointing at the angelic, perfect, hot-looking guy behind him.
Eung, I’m Jae Joong. Rynn-sshi, are you okay now?” He asked and made his move towards her.
E, gwenchanayo, oppa..” She replied, shyly.
Aigoo.. Now I don’t have to troubled myself so much anymore, because she can speak perfect Korean!” he claimed quickly in Korean, native language. He was so excited to hear Rynn replied him back perfectly in Korean.


Changmin grinned and give Jae Joong a few pat on his back.
Ne, hyung.. Aniyo, andwaeyo, she don’t know much. Trust me, she don’t. Just continue speaking in English even if your English is broken like crap.” He laughed a little, because he speaks bad English too. Only Yoochunnie can speak good English among them all.
“How dare you..” Jae Joong looked at him with a laser stare, but they both laughed in the end.
“Yeah, yeah, let’s just talk the crappy English.” He agreed to Changmin and giggled.
“Don’t worry. As long as you both could understand my crappy Korean, I can worked out on your crappy English..” and all three of them laughed at the same time.
“You’re funny.. aigoo..” Jae Joong comments as they were tired of laughing their arse out.
“And cute..” Changmin added.
Aniyo.. Stop making fun of me..” Rynn smiled shyly, feeling a little awkward being in the middle of two handsome-looking Korean guy on earth.
“No, no, we are serious.. You’re funny and cute..” Jae Joong said as he gave her the stare and smile. She blushed in instant. Jae Joong really have this power to steal girl’s heart just like that, by being honest and open.
“You know what, Rynn-sshi..”
De..” she replied to Jae Joong.
“This boy here was panic when you passed out, so he called me on my cell..”
Hyung, don’t start.. It’s embarrassing..”
Mwo eyo? Tell me..” Rynn asked in curiosity.
De.. This boy here was so worried about you. He was the one who carried you and took care of you just now.”
“Carried me???” Rynn almost screamed in total shocked.
Hyung!! *Na michigaesseo..” (Means, ‘Damn, I’m going crazy.. — all because of your doings..) Then he continued speaking in Korean, “Ah, I’ll surely kill you when we got back home, hyung.”


Jae Joong just laughed and laughed, he could not handle it anymore.
“Haha! You can’t because I’m your hyung. Hahaha!” He replied him quickly in Korean.
“He said he want to kill me when we got back home.” Jae Joong continued to joke, translating the whole harsh sentence back to Rynn so she could understand.
Jinja eyo?” Rynn laugh off as well, turning her head towards that blushing face of Changmin.
“Just ignore him. Aigoo, this is so embarrasing…” Changmin replied softly to Rynn and put his hand over his face.

"I think it's not something to be embarrased about. It's.. kinda.. sweet.. to me.." Rynn replied shyly. They both looked at each other, feeling awkward for a while. Jae Joong was the only one who is still giggling for some reason.

Jae Joong-hyung is such a prick! He will never change! Changmin’s heart screamed out. Jae Joong will always and always act like this because he is an honest person. He can accidently blurted out people’s secrets without knowing it. It happened a lot of time during interviews! The worst one was during the Dangyunhaji, also known as “Of Course!” game in The Xman Show. When he realized his mistakes, it was almost impossible to undo it because words spreads faster than Internet! He did say sorry a thousand times after that, anyway.
Gomawoyo. I think that is the only word that I could say right now.” Rynn said shyly.
“Oh, you can do something for me..” said Jae Joong, as he held Rynn’s hand.
“Just please get well before we leave.” He looked into her eyes again and she melt.
“Sure. I don’t want to troubled anyone, too..” she promised, as she started to feel sad because she will be alone again.
“Good.” Jae Joong let go of her hand and take a slight glance at shyly-looking Changmin.
“If you don’t get better, then this boy here maybe will not be able to leave this room with happy heart.” He blurted out, again. Changmin studdered on the spot.
“Bo ga, ‘happy heart’?” Changmin cries loudly at Jae Joong’s broken English.
“And why me? And also, stop addressing me as ‘this boy’. I’m not a boy anymore!” He cries.
Ahh..~ I’ve forgotten that part! Hahaha!”
“How could you say that to me, hyung…~~ Aigoo..~~ You are sooo evil…~~” And Changmin cannot help it but to smack Jae Joong right on his shoulder. Jae Joong smacked him back. They continued smacking softly on each other arms. Rynn smiled, feeling funny but amazed at the same time. She understood that both of these charming prince were very close to each other.


But these prince have to leave very soon and she will be on her own to solve her problem.
"Can I have your mobile number..?" suddenly Changmin blurted the words out.
"Err.. sure.." Rynn answered with trembling voice.
"Then, can I have it too?" Jae Joong immediately add-ons.
"Err.. sure, too.." Rynn smiled funnily, feeling really awkward to know they both want to have her number.
"Yay!" Jae Joong yelled in excitement and bring out his cellphone. Changmin smirked his face at Jae Joong. She said the number one by one, slowly. Both of them entered it in their cellphone and save it.
"My Little Puppy...! Aigoo.." Jae Joong whispered it at Changmin's ear when he took a peep at Changmin's cellphone screen.
"Hyung! Aish.." Changmin quickly keep his cell and start grabbing Jae Joong's.
"Aigoo.." Changmin did not dare to say the word but he smiled to himself, knowing the other side of Jae Joong.
"Superwoman Rynn.." Changmin sniggered to himself before Jae Joong took it back from him. So lame....
"Wae? Wae? Can't I name her that?" Jae Joong asked in Korean.
"Come on, I didn't say anything!!" replied Changmin, innocently.
"Well, you better don't! Or else, I will appear as Sadako and disturbed you at night. Haha!"
"You better disturb Yunho-hyung. He likes Sadako. Haha!"

Rynn cannot stop laughing. These boys are really amuzing. She totally forgot that she was not yet recovered and still need to have some rest.
"Stop making me laugh, you two.. Or else my stitches will open up because I laugh too much..." She said, softly. Both of the prince eyes widen, they were stunned for a second and stop fighting.
"Oh, we are so sorry! Are you in pain?" Jae Joong quickly kneel down next to her, holding her shoulder a little. Changmin also kneel and held her hand tightly, unable to say anything.
"I'm okay, I didn't mean to scare you both.. haha.. but you guys are amazing.. thank you.. So long I never had a good laugh.. Haha.. I'm fine.. Ha.."

Jae Joong and Changmin looked at her and there was about thousand of questions pop-up in their minds. She was laughing, and she looked so happy. They can tell it was a genuine laugh. In some other way, Jae Joong and Changmin feel relieved. At least when they leave, they will be leaving her some good, fun memories to be cherish.
"We are going to leave very soon. You don't have to worry of the door, we will figure out how to lock it.." Changmin said as he have to bid goodbye to Rynn. Rynn nodded, feeling sad but she don't really mind.
"Take care!" Jae Joong said as he also have to bring Changmin back to their home.

Jae Joong came up to her. He bend down and kissed her rosy cheek, followed by Changmin. He kissed her on the other side of the cheek and start hugging her. She hugged him back. There was a clear tears fell down from Rynn's cheek as he was saying something to her.
"I can never thank you enough for what you've done. Hope this memory will not fade from your mind." He whispered softly and finally let go of his masculine hands that embracing Rynn's skinny figure.
"But I must say goodbye." Changmin put his finger on her cheek, trying to stop the tears from falling.

Jae Joong looked at both of them and he started to back off little by little. When he finally managed to turn his back from them, Rynn was calling his name. He could not escape. A lamp post position for me, again? He asked himself, sarcastically.
It turn out to be she wanted to hug him as well. Jae Joong was shocked, but he agreed to it. Maybe this is the last time he'd ever see her again. But something has struck him as the ordinary girl's hand reached out and hug him close to her body. It was a different being hug by Changmin or the other member.

She was crying so softly. The warm tears fell down and he can feel it through his thin shirt. The girl is real. The feeling is real. It is very hard for you to say goodbye, isn't it? He felt it in him. That is what she was trying to say. It's a girl's language. He understand this language, its just that he have not meet a girl for a long time.
So he hugged her back. Long time ago, there was a girl like her in his life. Long, long time ago.
"Goodbye." Jae Joong said it anyway. "Please get well soon. We will text you!" he smiled with a sank heart.
"Goodbye, my lost puppy.." Changmin smiled cheekily. (Obviously he don't really feel what Jae Joong felt towards her. Changmin never in love with a girl before!)
And they both left.

Jae Joong drove the car slowly. He was so quiet after they left Rynn's apartment. Changmin was busy memorizing some songs from his iPod, so he did not bother what Jae Joong is thinking or doing. He was more into remembering his sweet moment with Rynn. The girl was so amazing and amuzing, too. Changmin had the feeling that they will be good friends for a long time, and with God's will they might end up dating as well! He blushed a little, thinking of how good it will be if Jae Joong-hyung was not there. They might be snogging back then! Changmin smiled again. It was a great experience, except for Rynn being stabbed. Oh no! That was not good at all!

Jae Joong bit his lips a little, Rynn's sad face were playing in his mind. He touched his own chest, and he still able to feel the warmth of her tears. It is very weird. So weird... and why... The attraction was so strong.. Did Changmin felt it? He looked at Changmin who is half asleep next to him.
"Obviously not!" He smirked a little and steer the wheel.


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sad Jae Joong...


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sad Changmin as he had to say goodbye to Rynn that night...

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